Aside from it being too long, wouldn't the matvh have benefited from some Mick Foley-style gore? They already alluded to how he helped make both of them. I know they want to avoid blood, but with pre-tapes, editing& fake blood, some barbed wire, thumbtacks or flaming tables would've helped a lot. Or throw somebody through a window ala Marty Jannetty. Should've Hollywooded it up.
Yeah or even brawling outside and finding somewhere with a more open space to move would have helped. The PC is just SO cramped and claustrophobic that there was just no way to build any actual momentum! Or create separation! Not even being snarky about it, either.